我写了两首，一首已经刊登在去年的校刊封底，还有另外一首是还未曝光/发表过的。希望大家评评看~~最近觉得时光飞逝，过了不久大家就各自东西了~虽然有点不舍，但岁月不饶人，唯有写写东西抒发情感。希望大家要常联络····可能有些人已经知道这首诗了，但我希望可以跟大家切磋切磋。谢谢。请记得要尊重版权哦~
也请大家为这首诗题个名字。。。
〉〉〉飘·散·银·花·万·语·痴，
挥·毫·难·绘·旧·颜·姿；
昔·缘·且·盼·心·间·烙，
往·事·唯·愿·忆·成·诗。
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-拓原洋介-
5 comments:
有点难度~这个还是要请教菀丽。呵呵
if this is hard for yin,then i sure cham alr.hahah.sorry lah,my chinese teruk,having troubles to understand it. =.=
you should use A2 punya English standard. that one only i can understand. lolz
But it's not too hard i think???
the last 2 sentences are quite easy..
i like this. but i can't think of a title for you la. sorry
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